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非常喜欢天外飞星大大的小说。希望这篇能给我们不一样的感觉

第一次不知道是从什么地方下载到飞星的作品,没想到竟是SIS的作者.感谢飞星的笔耕又垦新田.

惊现星大的新作！星大啊。你的导火线我到现在都是意犹未尽当经典小说来收藏的！你的文笔就算是在起点和飞库那都是签约作家！感谢您为我们广大的淫民服务，把H小说的境界发挥到了一定的程度！

引人意淫无限和精彩的故事情节深深的让我置身于文章之中

弱弱的问一句，叶青的故事结束了吗。能不能把这个故事结束掉呢

大大有出新书了！感动呀！大大的书，兄弟是 一本不落下的看过了！等待大大的更新！

感觉政治色彩太浓的就没有意思了，很容易被河蟹的

又见飞星大大的大作，从1001夜的报复找到你后，发现自己居然有绿帽情节，之后的导火线，复活以及之前的灰色三部曲，觉得你的构思真的很不错，有些含沙射影的影射出现在这个浮躁的社会一些负面的印象，不是经历过坎坷的人写不出这样的文章，希望大大以后能多写好文，说实在的，文章多~但是好文太少了，特别是绿帽情节的好文，更是少中之少

*** 作者被禁止或删除 内容自动屏蔽 ***

楼主的文章简直太长了，看了一半先做以下评论吧，以后有时间再细细品读。文章中的b国是指哪个国家啊？还是只是个代称啊？作者绝对是个军事高手啊，对战机至少有一定的了解；对国际形势也有一定的了解；通过作者的描述（莫猎艳那一段）让我想起中国的电视剧《远去的飞鹰》（也是男主人翁猎艳一个俄罗斯大妞结果就行了。）之后楼主写莫被女郎杀死感觉是仿照007《黄金眼》里的情节，反正我对这篇文章是赞不绝口啊！把读者带到了俄罗斯看见了蓝眼睛鹦鹉鼻子的大妞，一会又带到了特工杀人的情景、之后又上了天空，情节是此起彼伏，波浪式的前进；给读者以生动。这是我读过最好的军事小说；黄色也可以不过不是主要；说到黄色了楼主对俄罗斯大妞的描写细腻尤其说到奶子和俄国人做爱那种疯狂；这也是贴近实际的，写出了欧洲与亚洲人种的不同。唯一不足就是文章太长了；看得我眼睛都累了，希望楼主以后分开写比较好。谢谢美文红心送上。

人物真多啊！名字都忘了，看你的书，还长见识啊！世界大事都有描写，作者也看米基塔啊！我喜欢啊！悬疑，复杂，好莱屋似的宏大场景，牛。

这是以外國人為主角的故事，怎么又回来了？

故事很有真实感，有种意尤未尽的感觉，希望看见更多这样的作品。

故事很有真实感，有种意尤未尽的感觉，希望看见更多这样的作品。

故事很有真实感，有种意尤未尽的感觉，希望看见更多这样的作品。

被女人直接用有力的双腿给夹死，这种天马行空的想象力或许启发与赤裸特工的做爱后女人掰断男人脊椎吧，不过这个情节设计更给力更震撼！

战争类的H小说，第一次见呢，可能是我读的太少了。

支持共享！文中感觉跨度很大、有没有没有联系，是不是几篇凑在一起的还是为以后的故事做伏笔。

作者这篇小说写的很好，剧情紧凑，描写细腻，神作啊！